شعر من تآليفي بالانجليزي

[ـآلــبــدر ...!]

peace be upon u

I would rather die and not see you with any one else but me and out you i'm body with no soal

DO crazy somthing corect some words

Until the day I'll let you go
Until we say our next hello
It's not goodbye
'Til I see you again
I'll be right here rememberin' when
And if time is on our side
There will be no tears to cry
On down the road
There is one thing I can't deny
It's not goodbye


You'd think I'd be strong enough to make it through
And rise above when the rain falls down
But it's so hard to be strong
When you've been missin' somebody so long

It's just a matter of time I'm sure
But time takes time and I can't hold on
So won't you try as hard as you can
To put my broken heart together again

And what if I never kiss your lips again
Or feel the touch of your sweet embrace
How would I ever go on
Without you there's no place to belong

Well someday love is gonna lead you back to me
But 'til it does I'll have an empty heart
So I'll just have to believe
Somewhere out there you thinking of me

Bye

[! ترف !]

Wow !!
amazing words
strong feelings
well done !
you really succeed to clearing up your point or aim of this thought
it is heroism to try ,, so , you are a hero ^_^
I am glade to be the first one to read it
I really loved it
so keep it up
I noticed in this line
you right

But time takes time and I can't hold on

it does not make any sense
((time takes time))
I think that you mean something els

anyway !

excellent job : )

waiting for more

Best wishes
Gardee

[Oo_KSA_oO]

انا اكره الشعر بالعربي

واكتشفت اني اكرهه بالانجليزي بعد


يعني لا تتوقع من نقد

لكن الله يوفقك
ويعطيك العافيه

وتقبل ثقالت دمي
Oo_KSA_oO

[ـآلــبــدر ...!]

thanks Gardee

I realy can't talk .. i'm very happy .. The best thing your pen in my words nothing lo0o0ol

come every day .. i missing i realy do

come to me.. if u want ask me about any thing i'm realy can ansar > joking with u

bye

[ـآلــبــدر ...!]

انا اكره الشعر بالعربي

واكتشفت اني اكرهه بالانجليزي بعد


يعني لا تتوقع من نقد

لكن الله يوفقك
ويعطيك العافيه

وتقبل ثقالت دمي
Oo_KSA_oO

why u hate .. loool .. but don't hate me ok
thanks alot.. come every day

Bye